Chapter 16: Village Below the Mist IV

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Chapter 16: 16: Village Below the Mist IV --- "Get some rest. I will ring the bell at dawn." John hesitated for a breath, then turned and walked back toward the main hall. Sera remained behind. Alone in the quiet glow of candles, she pressed a hand to her chest. "I vow to serve the god," she whispered. "I don’t want to fall in love. No... I can’t fall in love." She slapped her cheeks to snap out of it. But her heart was already beginning to disobey. Soon the morning, the sun rose behind a thick curtain of valley mist. A single bell rang from the roof of the temple. Its echo carried across the village, soft and steady, a call not of warning, but of gathering. By the time John stepped out into the square, the villagers were already assembled. Dozens of them stood together. There were farmers with calloused hands, weavers with threads clinging to their sleeves, and old soldiers with faded scars who had long since traded their swords for shovels. Some fishermen and some young children. No one spoke as he arrived. All of them looked up as he stepped forward, his figure outlined against the temple’s stone. The mist curled around his boots. Behind him, the temple door remained half open, glowing with a quiet firelight. Sera stood at his side. She raised one hand. "This man is not your enemy." Her voice carried across the square with clarity. Not loud. Not forced. But with confidence. Everyone respects her in this village. "He is not here to steal or threaten. He comes from beyond, far beyond anything you know. The nobles will call him dangerous. The Circle Mages will call him cursed. But he is neither of those things." She turned slightly toward John. "He is what comes next." John stepped forward and met their eyes. The villagers did not move. Their faces held suspicion, curiosity, even fear. But they listened. He lifted the blade. "This world is broken." His voice was calm, almost quiet, but every word struck like a hammer. "The strong hoard magic. The weak die nameless in forests, tunnels and alleys. They speak of power and righteousness, but they leave you with nothing but scraps." He paused, turning his gaze from one end of the square to the other. "You want change. I have seen it in your eyes. You know it too. You work all day, yet your children go hungry. You send offerings to nobles, but no protection from their bullies. The nobles take your taxes and call it duty. The mages ignore your children and call it lower bloodline." He lowered the blade. "I carry knowledge far beyond any noble. Tools from another era. From a world that does not worship magic. I can forge weapons and defenses your enemies will not understand. I do not ask for loyalty. I do not ask you to bow." He pointed at the hills beyond the trees. "I ask for land. For a place to build. A place to stand. In return, I will protect this valley. And if you are willing, I will help you rise with me." The silence was thick. Then the village elder stepped forward. His back was bent with age, but his eyes were still sharp. He leaned on a wooden cane worn smooth by time. "Do you swear not to use this power against us?" His voice was hoarse, but steady. "We are common people. We do not have the luxury or capital to practice magic. Our lives are busy earning enough money to feed our family. We cannot afford the wrong side of power." John nodded once. "I swear. I do not want to enslave you. If fate allows, I will be your patron. I will make this place a forge of opportunity. I will open the path of magic to all who show talent. Or swordsman training to those who have the will." The old man looked at Sera. She said nothing at first. Then she gave a single slow nod. The elder turned back to John. "Then the land is yours. You may build. You may live here. You may fight here." He looked at the crowd. "And we will stand beside you. If your words prove true." John bowed his head once. He said no more. The village had given him its first yes. After the crowd began to thin, and the murmurs of uncertainty gave way to a hesitant, lingering acceptance, John found himself standing alone in the village square. The tension that had once blanketed the air like smoke had lifted. It was just enough for breath. The villagers had returned to their routines, but not with indifference. From behind shuttered windows and half open doors, they watched. Measured. Whispers echoed between cracked walls. Children peeked out from behind their mothers’ skirts. A pair of blacksmiths resumed hammering bent tools, but their rhythm had changed. It was quieter now. Slower. No longer afraid. But not yet trusting. Only curious. The village elder waited at the base of the temple steps, leaning slightly on his polished cane, the furrow in his brow now more thoughtful than wary. The lines of his face caught the sun like an old statue weathered by war and wind. When John approached, the elder inclined his head and motioned with a quiet wave of his hand. "This way," he said. "I will show you the land. It is not much, but it is soil you can call your own." John followed him behind. They walked without words, their footsteps crunching softly on the gravel path that curved behind the village’s outer homes. Fields stretched out in every direction, some freshly tilled, others carpeted with sprouting green sprouts. Ropes hung between drying poles, where bundles of flax and herbs dangled like prayer flags. A flock of chickens scurried past a child playing with a stick. Smoke rose in slow spirals from stone chimneys. A cart creaked as it rolled toward a barn, its wheel groaning like tired bones. The bark of a mutt echoed once and fell silent.

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Void Lord: My Revenge Is My Harem
Void Lord: My Revenge Is My Harem Author:NF_Stories
Chapter 1 - 01: Dying Wish I Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 2 - 02: Dying Wish II Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 3 - 03: Dying Wish III Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 4 - 04: Dying Wish IV Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 5 - 05: Dying Wish V Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 6 - 06: Dying Wish VI Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 7 - 07: Dying Wish VII Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 8 - 08: Dying Wish VIII Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 9 - 09: Dying Wish IX Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 10: Dying Wish X Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 11: Dying Wish XI Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 12: Dying Wish XII Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 13: Village Below the Mist I Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 14: Village Below the Mist II Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 15: Village Below the Mist III Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 16: Village Below the Mist IV Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 17: Village Below the Mist V Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 18: Village Below the Mist VI Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 19: Village Below the Mist VII Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 20: Village Below the Mist VIII Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 21: Village Below the Mist IX Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 22: Village Below the Mist X Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 23: Village Below the Mist XI Sep 20th, 2025
Chapter 24: Village Below the Mist XII Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 25: Village Below the Mist XIII Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 26: Village Below the Mist XIV Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 27: Village Below the Mist XV Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 28: The Path of the Mage I Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 29: The Path of the Mage Il Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 30: The Path of the Mage IlI Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 31: The Path of the Mage IV Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 32: The Path of the Mage V Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 33: The Path of the Mage VI Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 34: The Path of the Mage VII Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 35: The Path of the Mage VIII Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 36: The Path of the Mage IX Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 37: The Path of the Mage X Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 38: The Path of the Mage XI Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 39: The Path of the Mage XII Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 40: The Path of the Mage XIII Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 41: The Path of the Mage XIV Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 42: The Path of the Mage XV Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 43: The Path of the Mage XVI Sep 22nd, 2025
Chapter 44: The Path of the Mage XVII Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 45: The Path of the Mage XVIII Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 46: The Path of the Mage XIX Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 47: Lessons in Gravity I Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 48: Lessons in Gravity II Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 49: Lessons in Gravity III Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 50: Lessons in Gravity IV Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 51: Lessons in Gravity V Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 52: Lessons in Gravity VI Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 53: Lessons in Gravity VII Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 54: Lessons in Gravity VIII Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 55: Lessons in Gravity IX Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 56: Lessons in Gravity X Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 57: Lessons in Gravity XI Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 58: Lessons in Gravity XII Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 59: The Stranger Returns I Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 60: The Stranger Returns II Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 61: The Stranger Returns III Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 62: The Stranger Returns IV Sep 24th, 2025
Chapter 63: The Stranger Returns V Sep 24th, 2025
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