Chapter 109: 109. New Script

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Thank you, Potato, for becoming a Royal Knight on P@treon! Your support means the world to us. Shoutout to you enjoy all the exclusive perks that come with it! If you enjoy the chapter, don't forget to drop some Power Stones! Your support keeps me inspired to create and share more. Thank you!???????????? --- Daisy was in a bad mood, and her two sisters, Violet and Lily, looked equally dejected. "Maybe it's because our recent performances have been repetitive, and fewer people are attending our shows. Over the past few days, the auditorium has been almost empty, and there's no cheering anymore," Daisy lamented. As they spoke, the atmosphere grew heavy. Even Misty hadn't anticipated such a drastic change for her family. Kai stood to the side, thoughtfully stroking his chin. Although their situation sounded sympathetic, Kai had previously seen the Sensational Sisters' water ballet. Having spent some time behind the scenes while travelling in Kalos, he quickly identified the root of their problem after a moment of reflection. "The reason things have turned out this way is likely because the focus of your performances has shifted," he said. Everyone turned to look at him in surprise. Daisy, Violet, and Lily exchanged confused glances. "Huh? What do you mean by that?" Kai spoke calmly, "The last time I came to the Cerulean Gym, before battling you, I watched your water ballet. To be honest, while it was visually stunning, the performance itself was far too simplistic. By the end, the only thing I remembered was... well, your long legs on the water." Misty shot him a sharp glare, while Daisy, Violet, and Lily froze, glancing at one another in disbelief. "This..." The sisters had always been confident in their water ballets, and they enjoyed showcasing their beauty to their audience. But hearing that someone's main takeaway was merely their appearance stung. Though they hated to admit it, the dwindling audiences proved that something needed to change. Lily hesitated before asking, "So, what exactly do you mean by 'shifting focus'?" "I mean understanding your audience," Kai clarified. "From what I've observed, the majority of your viewers are adult men, and their primary interest is simply admiring your beauty. While it's appealing at first, the novelty wears off quickly, and they lose interest. Naturally, fewer people keep coming back." His words struck a chord. Even if they didn't want to hear it, they realized Kai wasn't just making an offhand remark his observations were spot-on. Lily's eyes lit up as if confirming her own suspicions. "See? I've been saying this all along!" Daisy nodded and turned to Misty. "That's why we've decided to have you take on the role of the mermaid princess! We believe this will help save the Cerulean Gym!" "What? No way!" Misty quickly refused. "I can't do something like that!" "But..." Daisy frowned, looking puzzled. "We've already posted the announcement. Everyone knows there's going to be a brand-new performance tomorrow, and the tickets are already sold out!" "Tomorrow?!" Misty slammed her hands on the table, standing abruptly. "You're telling me you expect me to perform tomorrow without even asking for my consent? Are you kidding me?!" Lily quickly pressed her hands on Misty's shoulders to calm her down, while tossing a small script onto the table. "Relax! This is the script we wrote for you. Just follow the lines it's super easy, even for someone without any acting experience like you." Misty shook her head vehemently. Seeing her resistance, Daisy pleaded, "Please, Misty! You're our sister. Do us this one favor!" Misty hesitated. Growing up, Daisy had always been the gentlest of her sisters and was the one Misty admired most. Seeing her now, Misty found it hard to outright refuse. Even Ash and Brock joined in to persuade her. Ash said, "C'mon, Misty, just give it a try." Brock added, "The tickets are already sold, and cancelling the show now isn't realistic." With so many people pressuring her, Misty's resolve began to waver. Seeing this, Violet and Lily turned to Ash and Brock with grateful smiles. "You're such good friends. Misty is lucky to have you!" Eventually, Misty sighed in resignation. She glanced at Kai, who gave her a slight nod of encouragement and finally relented. "Fine, I'll do it..." Hearing her agreement, Lily pumped her fist in triumph, grinning smugly. "I told you it'd be fine! Misty can never refuse Daisy's requests!" Violet ignored her, instead urging Misty, "Alright, let's go over the script quickly. If there's no problem, we can start rehearsing right away!" Misty rolled her eyes. While she'd agreed, she was still reluctant. Skimming through the script, she found it to be a cliché story about a prince defeating villains to save a princess. "Can this kind of plot really save the Cerulean Gym's reputation?" she muttered under her breath. Suddenly, she remembered something and turned to Kai. "Hey, Kai, didn't you once tell me about a story you wrote that became popular? Why don't you help us revise this script?" Misty was referring to Kai's adaptation of the Maiden's Peak legend into a manga. After being published, it became a bestseller and even gained popularity in neighbouring cities. Misty had overheard Kai mention it while they were at Cinnabar Island's hot springs, and it had stuck with her ever since. Kai shook his head. "I don't think I can. While the Maiden's Peak manga did well, that was mostly thanks to the artist and publisher. Writing a story is one thing, but adapting a script is another." "Wait, you wrote the story for the Maiden's Peak manga?!" Violet's eyes sparkled with excitement. "We read that manga just a few days ago! The story was so moving we thought it was written by some famous female author! I can't believe it was you!" Daisy clasped her hands together. "If that's the case, please help us revise the script!" Kai hesitated. "Writing and scripting are completely different skills. I've never worked on a script before. I might just make things worse." "Don't worry about that!" Daisy said earnestly. "The manga was already amazing, so your storytelling skills are solid. Anything you come up with will be better than what we've got now. Please, give it a try!" With Misty having already agreed and the sisters pleading so sincerely, Kai couldn't refuse. He sighed and nodded. "Alright, I'll give it a shot. But don't get your hopes up too high I can't guarantee anything extraordinary." ----- For early access to advanced chapters and exclusive illustrations made by me, visit my P@treon: P@treon/iamxeno Thank you so much for your support and for reading!

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Pokemon: Skybound
Pokemon: Skybound Author:Iamxeno
Chapter 1: 01. First Battle Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 2: 02. Professor Cerise Sep 15th, 2025
Chapter 3: 03. Bulbasaur's Mysterious Garden Sep 15th, 2025
Chapter 4: 04. Bulbasaur Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 5: 05.Leaving Vermilion City Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 6: 06. Cerulean City Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 7: 07. Kai vs Lily Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 8: 08. Kai vs Daisy Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 9: 09. First Badge Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 10: 10. Squirtle Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 11: 11. A.J Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 12: 12. Pallet Town Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 13: 13. Professor Oak Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 14: 14. Confused Charmander Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 15: 15. Ash. Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 16: 16. Gym Battle Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 17: 17. Boulder Badge Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 18: 18. Cerise Park Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 19: 19. Lt. Surge Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 20: 20. Electabuzz Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 21: 21.Thunder Stone Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 22: 22. Zapdos Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 23: 23. Volt Absorb Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 24: 24. Meeting The Trio Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 25: 25. S.S. Anne Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 26: 26. Buying Magikarp Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 27: 27. Looker Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 28: 28. Team Rocket Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 29: 29. Titanic Ending Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 30: 30. Planning The Escape Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 31: 31. The Escape Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 32: 32. Maiden's Peak Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 33: 33. Ghost Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 34: 34. Gastly Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 35: 35. Kai vs Gastly -1 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 36: 36. Kai vs Gastly -2 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 37: 37. Maiden's Spirit Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 38: 38. Saffron City Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 39: 39. Kai vs Sabrina -1 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 40: 40. Kai vs Sabrina -2 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 41: 41. Silph Tower Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 42: 42. Gastly Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 43: 43. Master Ball Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 44: 44. Giovanni Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 45: 45. Archer Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 46: 46. Mr Silph Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 47: 47. Evolution Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 48: 48. Gyarados Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 49: 49. Erika Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 50: 50. Perfume Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 51: 51. Kai vs Gozu -1 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 52: 52. Kai vs Gozu -2 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 53: 53. Retreat Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 54: 54. Revelation Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 55: 55. Kai vs Erika -1 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 56: 56. Kai vs Erika -2 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 57: 57. Kai vs Erika -3 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 58: 58. Peaceful Day Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 59: 59. Attack of Tentacool & Tentacruel -1 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 60: 60. Attack of Tentacool & Tentacruel -2 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 61: 61. Zapdos⚡-1 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 62: 62. Zapdos⚡-2 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 63: 63. Zapdos⚡-3 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 64: 64. Gathering of Powerhouse -1 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 65: 65. Gathering of Powerhouse -2 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 66: 66. The Hidden Base of Team Rocket. Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 67: 67. Team Rocket's Four Executives Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 68: 68. Arrival Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 69: 69. Giovanni Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 70: 70. Mewtwo Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 71: 71. Dragonite Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 72: 72. Dragonite Island Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 73: 73. Fuchsia City Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 74: 74. Fuchsia Gym. Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 75: 75. Finding Koga Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 76: 76. Aya Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 77: 77. Koga Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 78: 78. Soul Badge Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 79: 79. The Seafoam Islands Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 80: 80. Articuno -1 Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 81: 81. Articuno -2 Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 82: 82. Articuno -3 Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 83: 83. Articuno -4 Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 84: 84. Cinnabar Island Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 85: 85. Riddles Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 86: 86. Search of Gym Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 87: 87. Ash vs Blaine Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 88: 88. Kai vs Blaine-1 Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 89: 89. Kai vs Blaine-2 Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 90: 90. Kai vs Blaine-3 Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 91: 91. Volcano Badge Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 92: 92. Farewell Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 93: 93. Thief Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 94: 94. Biker Gang Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 95: 95. Kai vs Biker Gang Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 96: 96. Evolution Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 97: 97. Kai vs Four Executives -1 Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 98: 98. Kai vs Four Executives -2 Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 99: 99. Headache Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 100: 100. Eevee Brothers Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 101: 101. Mikey Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 102: 102. Battle Between Eevee Evolution's -1 Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 103: 103. Battle Between Eevee Evolution's -2 Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 104: 104. Sabrina Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 105: 105. New Outfit Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 106: 106. Kai vs Agatha -1 Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 107: 107. Kai vs Agatha -2 Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 108: 108. Water Ballet Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 109: 109. New Script Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 110: 110. Diantha Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 111: 111. Performance Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 112: 112. Script Tampered Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 113: 113. Heartbreak Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 114: 114. Invitation Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 115: 115.Vermilion City Port Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 116: 116. Storm Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 117: 117. Strongest Pokémon trainer Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 118: 118. Mewtwo's anger Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 119: 119. Lab Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 120: 120. Mew Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 121: 121. Memories Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 122: 122. Answers Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 123: 123. Rival? Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 124: 124. Indigo League Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 125: 125. Traveling Companion Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 126: 126. Meeting Erika Again Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 127: 127. Samurai Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 128: 128. Surprise Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 129: 129. The Pink Menace Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 130: 130. Indigo Plateau Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 131: 131. AJ Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 132: 132. Nervousness Sep 25th, 2025
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