Chapter 24 - 23

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Chapter 24: Chapter 23 After his sparring session with Instructor Sorin, Lumberling made his way down a quiet corridor to the dojo’s modest library, where the skill manuals were stored. The scent of aged paper and polished wood lingered in the air. "Excuse me," he said to the man shelving books. "I’m here to read the skill manual I rented." The librarian turned, adjusting his spectacles. "Name and the manual you’re here for?" "Lumberling. I enrolled this morning. I’m looking for The Pikeman’s Art." The man scanned a ledger, then gave a nod. "Found it. Please wait here a moment." He disappeared into a back room and returned shortly with a worn, leather-bound tome. "Remember the rules," the librarian said as he handed it over. "Do not share it. It may be a copy, but damage will be charged." Lumberling gave a respectful nod and found a quiet table. His fingers trembled slightly as he opened the book, heart quickening with hope. The early Chapters described the origin of the style, its philosophy, and ideal practitioners. There was a short section on specialization—thrust-focused combat, battlefield spacing, and group coordination. But then... that was it. He flipped the pages again. Nothing on how to break through limits. Nothing on improving one’s potential. Just detailed explanations of the form and its discipline. "That’s it? No way. Did I miss something?" He reread the manual, twice, then a third time. But the content never changed. No secret techniques. No hidden insights. Just a solid, basic introduction to the art of the pike. "Hah... What was I expecting? At least I know now I can’t rely on this." He sighed, rubbing his temple. "Maybe Instructor Sorin can help." ’There’s still so much I don’t know about this world. No need to feel down. My chance will come when the time is right.’ Day by day, he trained. Tirelessly. But despite hours of practice, not a single point was added to his [Beginner Spearmanship Lv3]. When he asked Instructor Sorin for guidance, the reply was firm and unflinching: "Either you haven’t truly understood the skill, or you’ve reached the limits of your potential." It wasn’t what he wanted to hear. But he kept going anyway. The dojo was a wide, open space—filled with the scent of sweat and aged pine, its floors worn smooth by years of repetition. The air echoed with the steady rhythm of wood-on-wood, the quiet grunts of effort, the occasional thud of a misstep. The others moved like shadows compared to him. There were eight of them—older, faster, stronger. Some practiced in pairs, some alone. A few glanced at Lumberling now and then, not with anger, but not with kindness either. Just distant looks, like he was a stranger they had no reason to care about. And maybe he was. They never spoke to him. He never asked for their names. He only knew them by the sound of their movements—the girl who always moved fast and light, the tall man who hit like thunder, the quiet one whose eyes never blinked during sparring. Lumberling kept his head down and trained. He was here for one reason: to get stronger. Master Sorin observed in silence, arms folded, his gray hair tied back. His sharp eyes swept the floor but lingered most often on Lumberling. He rarely spoke. But one evening, when class had ended and Lumberling stayed behind alone, Sorin approached. "You don’t move like someone with talent," he said. Lumberling paused. "I don’t?" "You move like someone who refuses to stop." It wasn’t clear if it was a compliment. But Lumberling took it that way. He stayed late again the next day. And the day after that. Months passed. His arms ached daily. His movements sharpened little by little. Yet still... no experience gain. He checked again. Beginner Spearmanship Lv3 (0/1000) ’It’s still too early to judge. Keep going.’ He extended his stay by three more months. Another 55 gold coins. A heavy price—but he paid it without hesitation. Time passed. Weeks turned into months, and though Lumberling trained nearly every day, little had changed on the surface. He still arrived early, left late, and said few words to the others. The dojo echoed with the sound of wooden spears striking against dummies and the floor. The rhythm was uneven—some fast, some slow—but the intent was always the same: to improve. Lumberling stood at the far end, sweat rolling down his face as he repeated the same thrust for the fiftieth time. His movements weren’t smooth yet, and his feet still fumbled the steps now and then. But he didn’t stop. The others around him—eight students in total—were sharper, stronger, more polished. They had been here longer and it showed. Lumberling didn’t talk to them much. They didn’t talk to him either. No one disliked him, but no one seemed to care about him either. Except Henry. Henry was the tall one, always relaxed but steady in his strikes, a Knight Apprentice stage too, on his early thirty’s. One day, during a short break, he walked over and said, "Your backhand swing is too close. You’re crowding yourself." He didn’t wait for permission. He just picked up his own spear and showed Lumberling the motion—clean and controlled. Lumberling adjusted his form. It felt better. After that, he gave Lumberling a few more tips over the weeks. Nothing deep. Nothing personal. Just advice, when he felt like it. Lumberling appreciated it, even if their conversations never lasted more than a minute or two. Then, one afternoon, something different happened. Most of the others had left early. Only a few students remained, including Stacy. Lumberling had seen her many times before—quick on her feet, focused, rarely speaking. Today, though, she looked frustrated. Lumberling watched from the corner, then slowly walked over. "You’re rushing the turn," he said. "Your front foot’s landing too early." Stacy gave him a quick look. Not angry, just surprised. "Show me." she said. He did. Slow and deliberate. She tried again. Still rough. But better. "Hm. Thanks," she muttered. Lumberling nodded and went back to his own training. They didn’t speak again that day. Or the next. She didn’t avoid him. But she didn’t come to him either. And that was fine. Lumberling kept training. Henry would still offer a comment every now and then. Stacy stayed focused on her own work. The others remained in their own circles. But the silence wasn’t as heavy anymore. Lumberling wasn’t part of the group—but he wasn’t completely outside it either. Months passed. Josh, one of the students, finally advanced to Knight Page. His family—wealthy merchants—had supported his five-year journey here. It was his last day with them. Lumberling watched from a distance. He still hadn’t gained a single point. ’If I can’t break this wall, the rest of my skills will hit the same limit.’ He clenched his fists. ’Keep going. This is not where I stop.’ Lumberling moved through his drills near the far end, sweat dripping from his jaw, breath steady but shallow. He adjusted his grip mid-swing, correcting an error he saw in Genley’s form earlier that day. It felt better. Tighter. Sharper. His body hurt, but that was normal now. The others were here, too. Always ahead of him, always training harder—or maybe just better. Jack and Fiona, both at the Quasi-Knight stage, sparred in short bursts, their speed almost too fast to follow. Jack’s strikes were wide and punishing, Fiona’s clean and methodical. She moved like someone with purpose—never flashy, but never off balance. She spoke with Lumberling once or twice. Just in passing. A comment on footwork. A nod of approval. She wasn’t cold. Just distant. Still, he could tell—she noticed him. He knew her story, same as everyone. A noble’s bastard child. Treated with quiet respect, never directly challenged. Most spoke to her carefully. Not because they liked her—but because of who her blood tied her to. Lumberling didn’t treat her any different. He just bowed like he would to anyone else, then went back to training. Aaron, Stacy, and Genley, all Knight Pages like him, trained in a tighter group. Their movements were solid, practiced, confident. Lumberling learned a lot just by watching—how Aaron kept his guard high even while stepping back, how Stacy used her reach to pressure, how Genley shifted his weight before every strike. Henry, the Knight Apprentice, helped when he felt like it. A nod here, a tip there. Lumberling never asked for anything. But Henry gave it anyway. Over time, Lumberling started to understand something else. They were all backed by nobles. Sponsorships. Promises. Paths laid out before them. Once they became full Knights, they would serve noble houses—some as protectors, some as champions. It was the natural order. Power served power. But none of that changed his focus. He didn’t come here to be recognized. He came here to grow stronger. As the others began to finish for the day, Lumberling remained. He worked through his final set—tight, deliberate strikes, feet sliding smoothly between positions. As he finished, Fiona walked past him toward the exit. She slowed for half a second, just enough to glance his way. "You’re consistent," she said. "That’s harder than talent." Then she was gone. Lumberling stood still for a moment, unsure what to make of her words. He didn’t smile. He didn’t speak. He just lowered his spear, wiped the sweat from his brow, and got ready to repeat the drill one more time.

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Contents
The Devouring Knight
The Devouring Knight Author:ChrisLingayo
Chapter 1 Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 1 - 0 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 2 Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 2 - 1 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 3 Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 3 - 2 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 4 - 3 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 5 - 4 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 6 - 5 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 7 - 6 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 8 - 7 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 9 - 8 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 10 - 9 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 11 - 10 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 12 - 11 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 13 - 12 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 14 - 13 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 15 - 14 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 16 - 15 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 17 - 16 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 18 - 17 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 19 - 18 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 20 - 19 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 21 - 20 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 22 - 21 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 23 - 22 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 24 - 23 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 25 - 24 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 26 - 25 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 27 - 26 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 30 - 29 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 31 - 30 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 32 - 31 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 33 - 32 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 34 - 33 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 35 - 34 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 36 - 35 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 37 - 36 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 38 - 37 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 39 - 38 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 40 - 39 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 41 - 40 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 42 - 41 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 43 - 42 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 44 - 43 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 45 - 44 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 46 - 45 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 47 - 46 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 48 - 47 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 49 - 48 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 50 - 49 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 51 - 50 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 52 - 51 Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 53 - 52 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 54 - 53 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 55 - 54 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 56 - 55 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 57 - 56 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 58 - 57 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 59 - 58 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 60 - 59 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 61 - 60 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 62 - 61 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 63 - 62 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 64 - 63 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 65 - 64 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 66 - 65 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 67 - 66 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 68 - 67 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 69 - 68 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 70 - 69 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 71 - 70 Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 72 - 71: Spearheart Doctrine Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 73 - 72: The First Guardian and the Final Promise Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 74 - 73: I Am Nothing Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 75 - 74: Awakening the Formless Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 76 - 75: The Predator Remembers Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 77 - 76: The Eight-Legged Memory Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 78 - 77: Peace Never Comes Freely Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 79 - 78: Rhythms of War Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 80 - 79: Loyalty and the Spear Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 81 - 80: Flame, Stone, and Steel Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 82 - 81: Foundations of the Second Dawn Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 83 - 82: The Invitation Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 84 - 83: Where Monsters Bow Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 85 - 84: Not One People, But One Future Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 86 - 85: No Cheers, Only Change Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 87 - 86: The Legion Wears Black Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 88 - 87: The First Hunt of Duskspire Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 89 - 88: A Familiar World in Disguise Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 90 - 89: To Devour the Arcane Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 91 - 90: Knowledge in the Ash Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 92 - 91: When Power Refuses Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 93 - 92: When Titans Walk Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 94 - 93: Shadows Speak in Blood Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 95 - 94: The Doctrine and the Knight Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 96 - 95: From Another Heaven Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 97 - 96: The Prince Who Dreamed of Heaven Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 98 - 97: One Path Ends, Another Begins Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 99 - 98: The First Step, The Final Rites Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 100 - 99: The Edge Before Ascension Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 101 - 100: A Cultivator Without a Sect Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 102 - 101: What They Carry Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 103 - 102: Not This Time Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 104 - 103: The Last Mission Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 105 - 104: What Comes After Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 106 - 105: To Bleed a Marching Army Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 107 - 106: The Forest Hunts Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 108 - 107: Heart of the Forest Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 109 - 108: The Silence of Victory Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 110 - 109: Names We Carry Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 111 - 110: Still Standing Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 112 - 111: Martial Growth Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 113 - 112: One Scar at a Time Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 114 - 113: The First Forge Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 115 - 114: To Bow Without Breaking Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 116 - 115: Not Your Enemy Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 117 - 116: What Remains of Her Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 118 - 117: Curiosity in the Glade Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 119 - 118: When Soldiers Watch Elves Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 120 - 119: Campfire Games Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 121 - 120: Looters in the Storm Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 122 - 121: Echoes of Stage Six Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 123 - 122: Where the Light Begins Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 124 - 123: A Different Kind of Power Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 125 - 124: Roots of Loyalty Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 126 - 125: The Concordia Cycle Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 127 - 126: Check, But Not Mate Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 128 - 127: Between Mana and Muscle Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 129 - 128: Fireballs and Footnotes Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 130 - 129: Even If I Fail Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 131 - 130: Fangs Beneath Iron Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 132 - 131: Even Spars Can Kill Sep 25th, 2025
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