Chapter 58: Power Test

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Chapter 58: Power Test “Fail.” The stern examiner glared at the young man, and he withdrew his hand from the crystal. The young man looked like he wanted to say something for a moment, to try and argue with the examiner, but the crystal had only flickered with an incredibly faint red light. He was only sixteen, young enough that he still had at least four more tries to enter the Knight Academy, so he shut his mouth and dutifully left the station, making for the field’s gate. Charles saw the whole thing and was just about drenched in sweat. It was almost his turn, and out of the forty-five people who had tried their hand at the crystal, only seven had passed. The next applicant stepped up. He walked straight to the crystal without even waiting for the examiner to call him forward. So confident was he that he seemed to forget to give the examiner his scorecard. He placed his hand upon the crystal and began channeling his magic power into it. But, his confidence was all for nothing, because the crystal pulsed with a red light that was barely brighter than the previous man. “Fail.” said the examiner. “What? No!” The young man’s confident fa?ade shattered, and he turned to the examiner. “Let me try again, I can do this!” The examiner was having none of it, though. “You failed. Get lost.” The man ignored the examiner and extended his hand to the crystal again, but before he could touch it, the examiner lunged forward and drove his fist into the young man’s stomach. The young man collapsed, and the examiner kicked him to the side before grabbing his scorecard and tearing it to pieces. He glanced back at the line, and growled, “Next.” The next man came forward. He did like all the others had before him and placed his hand upon the crystal. Again, the crystal flashed a dull red light, not enough for the man to pass. An extremely dejected look appeared on his face, but when the examiner said ‘Fail’, he didn’t stick around. “Next.” It was now Charles’ turn. He tried to swallow his fear, then stepped forward. He held out his scorecard for the examiner with trembling hands and approached the crystal. Before stretching out his hand, he took a few deep breaths, giving the mana in the air time to be absorbed by his lungs. He couldn’t wait too long, though, and reached for the crystal. When his fingers came into contact with it, he channeled every drop of mana within him into his hand as quickly as possible. For a moment, there was no response. His magic power flowed into the crystal like a tiny river into the Endless Ocean, and his heart rate skyrocketed in panic. But then, a tiny red light appeared in the crystal. It grew in brightness until nearly a quarter of the crystal had turned red. He kept going, but the crystal didn’t grow any brighter. He looked to the examiner and braced himself for failure. “… Pass.” Charles released a breath he hadn’t realized he’d been holding. A smile broke out onto his face and he had to fight the urge to laugh in relief. The examiner quickly wrote down something on his scorecard and handed it back to Charles. “Go over to the building over there…” The examiner gestured over his shoulder with his thumb. “… and show this card to one of the examiners behind the desk.” “Thank you!” Charles was giddy with excitement and had to force himself not to pull the examiner in a hug. The examiner just scowled at him, then turned his eyes back to the line and shouted, “Next!” Charles got the hint and hurried off. There were three relatively small two-story rectangular buildings on the edge of the field, one on every side of the iron fence with the gate on the final side. On the way to the building the examiner pointed to, Charles looked at his scorecard. Below his personal information and the crystal station number, there were three large boxes in a row. In the left-most box, the examiner had written ‘028’. He needed a score of at least twenty in each test in order to pass. A twenty-eight wasn’t that great, but he passed. Next up should be the combat test, then the written test. ‘I wonder how Leon is doing… Has he passed yet?’ Charles thought as he pushed the door to the building open. There was no doubt in his mind as to whether Leon would pass this test or not. ‘Probably not. His station was further away, he’s probably further back in line…’ Charles wasn’t wrong, Leon was still waiting in line. There were still about forty people or so ahead of him by this point, but he wasn’t paying even the slightest bit of attention to them. Instead, he had been watching the third-tier tests. They hadn’t lined up but rather had formed a large group and began egging each other on, treating this test as more of a game amongst themselves than anything. Leon was too far away to hear what they were saying, but they seemed to be having a great time. Despite being stronger than them, the examiner didn’t disturb them, allowing the young nobles to undergo the test at their own pace. Consequently, only about half of them had gone through in this time. Leon watched as the golden-haired noble decide that it was his turn to go through and stepped forward to the cheers of his peers. When he touched the crystal, almost immediately it glowed red, then orange, only stopping when the entire core of the crystal had turned bright yellow. The other nobles cheered, but Leon saw that the golden-haired noble seemed a little disappointed in his performance. Even from this distance, Leon could tell that there was a slight tinge of orange that clung to the edges of the crystal. The golden-haired noble joined the ranks of those who had finished the test, and one man in particular, a tall and lean man, slapped him on the back in congratulations. The golden-haired noble smiled rather meekly in response, as this was one of the men that Leon had noticed him go out of his way to greet. The nobles stopped cheering and grew deathly silent when they saw who was going to take the test next, the woman in blue. She walked towards the crystal so gracefully that she almost seemed to glide. She gently pressed her hand against the crystal, which responded by quickly glowing bright yellow, with no hint of orange. Her cold emotionless face didn’t so much as twitch as she stepped away from the crystal, though the group of young nobles clapped and cheered. Next came the woman in yellow. The crystal was made to match her clothes just as fast as the woman in blue, to the celebration of the noble crowd. The woman in yellow was very happy with the result, and ran straight to the woman in blue, happily hugging her friend. The woman in blue cracked a very brief smile, then the two began walking towards the building opposite from the gate, completely ignoring the other nobles. The golden-haired noble called after them, asking them to wait with everyone else, but the woman in blue didn’t even acknowledge his presence, and the woman in yellow just waved to him with a smile on her face, and they kept walking. Leon noticed that they would pass close by his station, so he hurriedly turned his gaze away from them. The woman in blue wasn’t paying any attention to the other people around, but the woman in yellow’s head was on a swivel, taking in everything that she could. Inevitably, as they passed Leon’s station, she noticed him. He wasn’t trying to stand out, but he wasn’t exactly hiding his aura, either. The woman in yellow’s radiant smile faltered for a moment in surprise, then she leaned over to whisper to the woman in blue. The latter’s eyes briefly narrowed in suspicion before whispering back to the former. They nodded to each other, then proceeded towards their destination. They didn’t bother thinking more of Leon, because if he were truly third-tier, they’d meet very soon anyway. After those two and the golden-haired noble had taken their power test, Leon rather lost interest in continuing to watch the other third-tier nobles. He calmly waited until it was his turn to approach the crystal. As with all the other examiners, the one running his station was a very humorless man who was only concerned with keeping the line moving in an orderly fashion. He would hurry the applicants forward by almost yelling ‘Next!’ at them while giving a glare filled with killing intent. Perhaps it was because he was so unnerving that out of the hundred or so applicants who went before Leon, only nine had passed. When it was Leon’s turn, the examiner was about to do the same as he had with all the other applicants, but as soon as his eyes met Leon’s, he caught himself. He shut his mouth and gave Leon a respectful nod, which Leon returned. The examiner could tell from Leon’s aura that he was a strong third-tier mage, perhaps even stronger than he was. It wouldn’t do to make enemies of one with such strength at such a young age. Leon walked up to the crystal and casually placed his hand upon it. It immediately flashed red, and seconds later to orange. The examiner watched in near awe as the orange gave way to yellow, which filled the entire crystal. “Out of curiosity, how high can these crystals measure?” Leon asked the examiner, clearly not caring much about the test. “The fif… They can reliably measure up to the fifth-tier. Sixth-tier and up would likely make it explode.” responded the examiner. Now, it wasn’t just Leon’s aura that shocked him, but his fairly dismissive attitude towards the test. The examiner was only used to dealing with first-tier commoners who would give the test their all, so Leon’s casual attitude really threw him for a loop. “Alright, you passed.” the examiner said after a few more seconds. He would’ve said so sooner, but Leon had thrown him completely off his game. In fact, as Leon removed his hand, the examiner could’ve sworn he saw a tiny hint of white in the core of the crystal. He wrote ‘100’ down on Leon’s scorecard and passed it back to Leon as quick as he could, then pointed him towards the same building the two third-tier women had gone to. Leon frowned a little but began walking towards it anyway. Glancing over his shoulder, he noticed that the third-tier nobles had also finished and left while he hadn’t been paying attention. Not that it really mattered to him, though. The administrators in the building entrance were packing up their things when Leon pushed the door open. Most of the first-tier administrators didn’t do more than give Leon a casual glance, not even trying to examine his aura. The one who seemed to be in charge, a second-tier mage wearing a green military casual uniform, did a little more than glance at Leon. She noticed his third-tier strength and immediately walked over to greet him. “Hello, Good Sir, what brings you over here?” Leon looked around in confusion for a second or two before answering. “… I was told to come here for the enrollment test…” he said quietly. “Y-You were?” The woman was so taken aback she stuttered a bit. All the third-tier nobles had already arrived, so she wasn’t expecting another applicant to walk in, which was why all her people were busy packing up. “… May I see your scorecard?” she asked politely. Leon obliged, handing her the card. When saw his name, her panic receded. For a moment, she had thought he was another noble, but she didn’t recognize his name, so she relaxed. If he were noble, it would be very hard to explain why her people were getting ready to leave so early, but since he wasn’t, this would be much easier to take care of. “I’m terribly sorry, we weren’t expecting anyone else to come in. Just give us a few seconds, and we’ll get this sorted out, ok?” Leon nodded, and she quickly handed the card to one of her subordinates. It took a few more minutes, but she came back to him with the card and directed him to go through the only other door in the room. “… Thanks…” he muttered, just loud enough for her to hear. She hoped it wasn’t sarcastic, but it didn’t seem to be so. Leon left the administrators to their business and walked towards the next set of doors. When he pushed them open, he found himself in a huge nearly empty room. It was big enough for at least five hundred to exercise in, but it was filled with only thirty-five others. These thirty-five people were now staring at Leon, and most of them didn’t bother hiding their hostility.

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Contents
The Storm King
The Storm King Author:warden1207
Chapter 1: The Forest of Black and White Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 2: Magic Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 3: Inherited Blood Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 4: Preparations Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 5: The Hunt I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 6: The Hunt II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 7: Ritual I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 8: Ritual II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 9: The Vision Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 10: Soul Refinement Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 11: Mana Glyph Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 12: The Mission Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 13: The Team Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 14: Two Journeys Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 15: Vale Town Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 16: Guests Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 17: A Meeting Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 18: Friction I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 19: Friction II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 20: The Village Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 21: Recon Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 22: The Raid I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 23: The Raid II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 24: The Guide Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 25: Going East Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 26: Identity Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 27: The Glade Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 28: Return Journey Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 29: A Call Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 30: An Attack Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 31: The Fight Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 32: Serana Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 33: Fifteen Years Ago Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 34: Artorias’ Last Breath Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 35: Burial Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 36: Ambition Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 37: West Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 38: The Prison In The Mountains I Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 39: The Prison in the Mountains II Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 40: The Prison in the Mountains III Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 41: The Prison in the Mountains IV Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 42: The Prison in the Mountains V Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 43: Leaving the Prison Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 44: Reaching Civilization Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 45: Charles Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 46: The Bank Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 47: Tower Lord Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 48: The Vault Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 49: His Name Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 50: On to the Inn Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 51: The Estate Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 52: The Door Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 53: Flight from the Estate Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 54: Breathing Exercises Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 55: The Capital Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 56: Some Much Needed Training Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 57: The Enrollment Test Begins Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 58: Power Test Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 59: Combat Test I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 60: Combat Test II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 61: End of Enrollment Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 62: Chance Encounter Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 63: Results of the Test Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 64: Their Fortress Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 65: Tension in the Dining Hall Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 66: Rules and Structure Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 67: Basic Combat I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 68: Basic Combat II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 69: Start of Classes Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 70: Additional Instruction Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 71: Brewing Trouble Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 72: Her Challenge Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 73: The Pool Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 74: A Battered Pride Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 75: Plans for Retaliation Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 76: Leon’s Comedy Routine Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 77: Rain Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 78: Remnant Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 79: A Subdued Response Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 80: The Next Week Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 81: Capital’s Tower Lord Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 82: Search for a Bow Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 83: The End of Basic Combat Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 84: Assault on the Snow Lions I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 85: Assault on the Snow Lions II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 86: Missing Snow Lions Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 87: Absence Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 88: Where They Were Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 89: First-Aid Week Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 90: Armor, Small Unit Tactics Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 91: Patrol Training Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 92: Planning an Attack Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 93: Banner Raid Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 94: A King’s Demand I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 95: A King’s Demand II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 96: Safety Measures Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 97: Introspection Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 98: Acquiring Ingredients I Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 99: Acquiring Ingredients II Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 100: Potion Preparations Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 101: The Following Weeks Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 102: Ambush Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 103: The Chase Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 104: Brotherly Concern Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 105: An Unexpected Request Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 106: An End to Denial Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 107: Return of the Snow Lions Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 108: Heavy Infantry Training Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 109: Lions and Tigresses Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 110: The Arena Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 111: Burning Pain Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 112: Severe Burns Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 113: Demon Fire Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 114: Monster Classes Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 115: Final Classes Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 116: FTX Prep Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 117: FTX I Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 118: FTX II Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 119: FTX III Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 120: FTX IV Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 121: FTX V Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 122: FTX VI Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 123: FTX VII Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 124: FTX VIII Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 125: FTX IX Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 126: FTX X Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 127: FTX XI Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 128: Post-FTX Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 129: Old Acquaintances Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 130: Lion Armor Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 131: Intimacy Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 132: Decimius Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 133: Departure Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 134: The Galley Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 135: Blood on the Naga Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 136: Cyrene Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 137: Fort 127 Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 138: Samuel Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 139: Supply Mission Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 140: Trouble Moving South Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 141: The Third Watchtower Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 142: Remnants of the Squad Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 143: Leon and Alix Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 144: The First Watchtower Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 145: Retreat to the Fort Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 146: Rest Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 147: A Clearer Picture Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 148: Delaying Action I Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 149: Delaying Action II Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 150: Ulfr Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 151: Jean’s Promise Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 152: The Valemen Charge Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 153: Battle for the Fort I Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 154: Battle for the Fort II Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 155: Battle for the Fort III Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 156: Battle for the Fort IV Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 157: Battle for the Fort V Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 158: Battle for the Fort VI Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 159: Battle for the Fort VII Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 160: Battle for the Fort VIII Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 161: Consul of the North Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 162: Making Plans Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 163: Two Years Early Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 164: Trust Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 165: Relaxing in the Capital Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 166: Roland’s Investigation Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 167: Investigations and Enchantments Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 168: Sanctions Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 169: Family Dinner Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 170: Inner Fire Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 171: Southern Cruise Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 172: The Bull’s Horns Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 173: Diplomatic Corps I Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 174: Diplomatic Corps II Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 175: Anna Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 176: Meeting the Diplomats Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 177: Magic Senses Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 178: Diplomatic Mission Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 179: The Crater Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 180: Exploring the Crater Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 181: Stupid Dumb Idiot Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 182: The Cradle Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 183: Anzu Sep 25th, 2025
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