Chapter 24: Mangled Monstrosity

Words : 1515 Updated : Sep 10th, 2025
Emerius exhaled deeply, sheathing his sword and tapping his other blade to make sure he hadn’t lost it in the fray. "It is good that my assumption was correct. I had hoped it was, but wasn’t sure." Charon, happy to have stopped running, put his hands on his knees as he took in air. "What do you mean? What weren’t you sure about?" Emerius gestured to the tree. "This tree is one of the God Marked. Rare, valuable, and incredibly potent in magic. Nothing a Mangled Monstrosity would risk getting near." Charon shot up in confusion, his lip curling. "What about hiding in a crack? You told me we would have to keep running!" His companion gave him a flat look. "That was also a possibility. I had to make a decision; explain the details of the tree, or prepare you for if I was wrong. The goal was for us to survive." Charon was still a little hurt, especially as Emerius had plenty of time during their run to fill him in, but he wasn’t in the mood to start a fight. He glanced back. ’I’ve had enough fighting for the day. Or the week. Actually, the year. I’m done fighting things.’ "What even was that thing?" "A Mangled Monstrosity. A small one, thank the gods. I grew up hearing stories about it, but never thought I’d see one during my lifetime." Charon gave him a look, showing exactly how much he appreciated the half-assed description. Rolling his eyes, Emerius continued, taking on a forced upbeat tone. "They are apocalyptic beasts. They grow by consuming humans and other sentient creatures, incorporating them into a single mass. The danger is in how they gain the memories and skills of those they eat, and after a certain point, they can even wield magic." For the first time, Charon saw Emerius shiver. ’So he CAN feel fear.’ "My grandfather told me that the last time humanity faced one was when we had barely left our original solar system. A species called the Hyperboreans had been fighting one for centuries. They had gone from the largest empire to even walk the galaxy, to extinct, their last holding just barely managing to slay the beast." Charon had never heard of the Hyperboreans before. As far as he knew, the humans had built the largest empire in history, but Emerius was claiming they had been beaten by this unknown species. Despite his misgivings, he knew Emerius wasn’t lying. There was a gravity to the way he explained it, a meaning that spoke to some kind of culture. ’Inner ring people must have their own ways of doing things. It wouldn’t surprise me if some ancient spacefaring species would have scared them, causing them to remember for centuries.’ "How did you know that one was chasing us?" Emerius shot him a glare for only a second, his gaze softening quickly. "Do not trouble yourself with that. Just trust that I will be able to protect us from similar creatures. The real question is, how does this realm have such a terrifying monster?" Charon shrugged. "It’s a place for the undead. That could have been the one that killed the Hyperboreans, right? Shouldn’t it be as simple as that?" His companion shook his head. "No, that is not right. The Mangled Monstrosity was said to be the size of a star, twisting the gravity for many light years. The one we saw was nothing close to that. Something about this place... it worries me." Charon just nodded along with the words, unwilling to reveal everything he knew about the River Acheron just yet. ’This creature sounds just like the type of beast to deserve a place in the strongest undead realm, but Emerius is right. Why is it so small? Could there have been more than one?’ It was indeed a worrying thought. If only one of them had managed to destroy a galactic empire, then what could two do? Or three? Shaking his head to banish the thoughts, he turned his attention back to the tree, which was now only a short walk away. At some point during the chase, they had arrived under the champion’s shade, the sun vanishing in the black-leaved canopy. His robes fluttered excitedly, an action that surprised Charon. ’The Warden likes this place? It shouldn’t surprise me, this realm is home after all. We aren’t too far from the beach, he probably visited this tree every now and then. Welcome home, buddy!’ He might’ve imagined it, but he thought his robes fluttered a little more, as if they enjoyed his consideration. "What is a God Marked tree anyway? This thing must be the largest tree in the galaxy!" Emerius, for the first time since they came to the realm, sounded excited as he replied, finally able to share some information he enjoyed. "According to the legends, each tree represents an important treaty signed by the gods. They all have ten arrows, and the most prominent one shows which god is the beneficiary." He pointed to the purple symbol on the base, the ten arrows. "The downward arrow means the God of Death has jurisdiction here. Nothing will want to earn his ire by trespassing on these hallowed grounds, but we should be fine. Our elements are his gifts, after all. He won’t punish us just for being here so long as we remain respectful." It all felt a bit fantastic to Charon, a fact he enjoyed as he snickered behind his hand. ’It’s the kind of thing the heroes would find! Some ancient artifact would be buried within, and the Elves would be trying to steal it. This is exactly what I had hoped to find, incredible and powerful locations with deep histories!’ He had always dreamed of moments like this, and here he was. Emerius led them both to the God Marked, making sure that they were directed at the arrow. "The arrow is always positioned above the entrance. Inside, we should find a temple. Given that a Mangled Monstrosity is just outside, I doubt there will be many priests left, but they could be supplies." Not long passed before Emerius’ claim was proven. A tall opening was set into the trunk, exactly where the arrow pointed. It was wide and asymmetric, seemingly made from a cut in the bark. The closer they got, the more Charon could feel a draft coming from the interior, smelling like parchment and, strangely, smoke. Emerius smelled it too, tilting his head slightly and resting his hand on the pommel of one of his swords. No words were exchanged, but Charon knew he was being warned to keep an eye out. ’It’s a good thing I still have the dagger.’ The black blade was held tightly in his hand, ready to strike at a moment’s notice. With careful movements, they passed under the God Marked’s entrance. Charon instantly felt a sense of dread but ignored it, quickly viewing it as his nerves getting the better of him. They soon came across a series of metal torches set into the tunnel’s walls, purple flames snapping in the air. ’Emerius called them Everflame Candles.’ It was eerie to see them in this place after how they were arranged around the corpse, like they were a bad omen. To make matters worse, there were many more torches to come, being set about every ten feet. At one point, Emerius stopped to inspect them, but just shook his head, not finding what he had been looking for. After walking for a while, they finally found the temple itself. A stone doorway stood, empty hinges hanging from its frame. The accompanying doors were on the ground just inside the room, blasted into shards of ebony wood. Creeping through the opening, Charon flanked Emerius to his left, hoping that between the two of them, they could cover every angle. A large cathedral greeted them inside. Rows of wooden pews led up to a raised altar with a black-stone podium. Stained glass was set into the wall at the very back, but only a few torches remained lit, making it impossible to see the artwork. More doorways were set into the sides of the hall, two in the center, and another two near the podium. A metal chandelier hung from the roof, only one candle still flickering with life. What caught Charon’s attention was that, in the very center of the hall, was a small campfire, still alight with a red flame. The pews around it had been pushed away or broken down, a small pile of wood resting near the fire. The duo took a couple more steps into the hall, passing the first few pews and approaching the campfire. When they were only a dozen feet away, Charon noticed something else resting around the fire. Long strips of red meat, wooden cups for water, and a few sharpened pieces of metal to skewer food sat near an untouched pew, just a foot from the flame.

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Contents
Conquering the Stars with the Undead
Conquering the Stars with the Undead Author:Trim_2cool
Chapter 1: Charon Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 2: Noctis Vrex Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 3: Emerius Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 4: God of Death Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 5: Element Trial Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 6: High Priest Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 7: Simple Riddle Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 8: Initiation Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 9: Personal Information Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 10: Summoned Creature Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 11: Warden Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 12: History Class Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 13: Mind Magic Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 14: Combat Instruction Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 15: Crazy Teacher Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 16: Flash and Ema Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 17 - One: Rise Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 18: Ritual Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 19: New Realm Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 20: Companion Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 21: Waterfall Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 22: Black Dagger Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 23: Many Armed Beast Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 24: Mangled Monstrosity Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 25: Four Voices Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 26: Escape Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 27: Undead Souls Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 28: Stranger Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 29: Ratlings Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 30: Battle Against the Rats Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 31: Second Wave Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 32: Novice Two Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 33: Story Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 34: Second Story Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 35: Journey to Rooks Ridge Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 36: Rooks Ridge Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 37: Colossus Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 38: High Elders Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 39: Animancer Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 40: Enlisted Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 41: New Holo-Pad Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 42: Plan of Attack Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 43: Group Rho Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 44: Charge Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 45: Killing Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 46: New Summons Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 47: Fight Against the Earth Mage Part 1 Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 48: Fight Against the Earth Mage Part 2 Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 49: Ammo Room Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 50: Hidden Bunker Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 51: Zeta Colossus Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 52: Pocketing a Machine Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 53: Hands Dirty Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 54: New Orders Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 55: Lieutenants Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 56: Black Gem Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 57: New Spell Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 58: The Fort Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 59: The Contract Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 60: Mask of the Jester Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 61: Signing Up Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 62: Arena Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 63: Wallflower Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 64: Jester Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 65: Fighting Jason Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 66: Jester’s First Act Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 67: Clown Guard Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 68: Enemy Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 69: Message Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 70: Training Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 71: First Lesson Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 72: Defense Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 73: A Talk Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 74: Aayla Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 75: The Mission Group Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 76: Theatre Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 77: Lantern Bearer Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 78: Memories Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 79: A Play’s Meaning Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 80: Spy Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 81: Spy Pages Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 82: The Wall Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 83: List of Names Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 84: Colossal Cache Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 85: Jester Lore Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 86: Balance Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 87: More Training Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 88: Historical Texts Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 89: Before the Mission Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 90: Mission Brief Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 91: Mission Roles Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 92: Dead Lands Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 93: Strange Fog Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 94: Shadow Follower Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 95: Lost Town Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 96: Achlys Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 97: Warden and Achlys Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 98: Strange Crown Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 99: Holo-Conference Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 100: Emperor Alexander Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 101: Vision in the Mist Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 102: Alastor Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 103: Ceris’ Revival Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 104: Worship Stones Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 105: Abel Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 106: Achlys and Alastor Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 107: Bonded Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 108: Archon Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 109: Achlys’ Abilities Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 110: Enemies Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 111: Crown of the Mists Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 112: Misty Staff Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 113: Back to the Town Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 114: Caring Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 115: Reunited Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 116: The Truth Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 117: Cults Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 118: Unchanging Dead Lands Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 119: Cult Appears Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 120: Explosive Machines Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 121: Special Kind of Special Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 122: Upgraded Creation Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 123: Cocoon of Fire Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 124: Fragments Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 125: Struggles in the Soul Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 126: Awake Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 127: Acolyte Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 128: Aurelian Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 129: Sophia Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 130: Sirus Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 131: Acolyte Reward Sep 17th, 2025
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