Chapter 17 – A painful endeavour

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Today was the day. Percy had finished mending the new cracks, restoring his soul to a pristine condition. He’d also refilled both cores and got a good night’s sleep. Adding to that, baldy had arranged for his children to manage the family, freeing himself to oversee his grandson’s venture. Admittedly, Percy felt a little guilty over it. Somehow, their strained relationship had evolved to the point of him monopolizing his grandpa’s time, which he knew was precious. The man was a Violet with an entire House to run and hundreds of people to look after, yet here he was, focusing his efforts on a Red-born teenager. Even if he couldn’t find a way to get stronger, he had to bring back for his family. Going over all the steps in his mind once more, Percy cleared his thoughts, beginning the process. First, he activated Soul Vision, tuning it to look at his own soul. Gathering mana on his fingertips, he placed his hand right in front of his sternum. Next, he sent a pulse of mana through his soul, letting it reflect off its edges. The moment it all returned to his chest, he seized the opportunity to grab the newly formed bump. He slowly pulled it outwards, ignoring the painful tears that started to form as the silver flame left the boundary of his flesh. Only after it stabilized did he send another pulse of mana from his core, trying to reinforce the damaged regions as he forced the protrusion to enlarge. *** Wave after wave, refill after refill, hour after hour, Percy continued to cultivate the ethereal substance in his hand. It was the very fabric he would craft his clone from. Soon after starting, he’d been elated to discover his soul was more durable than last time! He guessed the awakening of his second core had influenced it. Neither Percy nor Archibald had ever heard that one’s grade affected their soul, but then again, they hardly knew much about soul affinities to begin with. In hindsight, it wasn’t that odd either. The fact that promotions strengthened one’s body was common knowledge. It would be stranger if they didn’t have a similar impact on other aspects of one’s existence. If this hadn’t been the case, a Red core with a soul affinity would be able to kill a White with a sneaky spell, which was absurd to imagine. Either way, the young man gladly welcomed all the help he could get. And it help, as his soul was noticeably more resilient, the tears forming just a touch more slowly. Waiting for his core to refill for the umpteenth time, he tossed a quick glance out the window. Apparently, he’d been at it for over twelve hours. The orb in his hand was already larger than an apple. He was getting tired too, the concentration and pain taking a toll on his mind. His original plan had been to pull an all-nighter, gathering as much of his soul as possible before cutting out the clone. But that didn’t seem very realistic now. While he push himself to go on, it appeared there was a limit to how much of his soul he could pull out at once. The more he accumulated, the greater the pressure was, causing the cracks to appear faster. Right now, the damage was piling up more quickly than his newly strengthened soul and his manual reinforcement could handle. Unauthorized use: this story is on Amazon without permission from the author. Report any sightings. As soon as his core was refilled, he pulled the soul mana again. Unlike before, he didn’t send another pulse, instead gathering it manually inside the blob. For the next two hours, Percy filled the orb with as much mana as he could manage, causing it to glow more brightly, until even baldy could faintly see it. Moving the mana directly into it resulted in fewer losses, but the bump didn’t grow in size. Unless the mana travelled through his soul first, it didn’t have that effect. That was clearly an aspect of his bloodline he’d inherited from his family. The reason he was adding more mana to the orb was to give his clone some means of protecting himself later. He didn’t know what circumstances he’d find himself in, but he figured having a stockpile of mana to fall back to might be handy. he shrugged. ‘ Finally, he refilled his core one last time and – after giving his grandpa a resolute look – he fully activated his ability. The ghostly claw violently bolted out of his sternum, heading straight towards the thrumming blob. Wherever it passed, it carved nasty gouges in the silver flame, causing Percy to experience a world of agony. Not just that, but the tears that already existed widened, making the situation worse. Only after the claw entered the blob did something change, as it began to sizzle, the orb swelling and contracting around it a couple of times. Then… SNAP A loud shockwave rippled through Percy. The last thing he saw before his eyelids fell shut was a silver comet blasting out of his bedroom’s wall. *** “Fuck.” was the first word that came out of his mouth. The original Percy’s that was – not the clone’s. His head ached as if it had been split in half. And if not, perhaps he should consider it. . He was lying on his bed, in a pool of sweat, the sheets sticking to his back. “How are you feeling?” baldy asked, sitting on a chair next to him. The man’s hand was raised, a gentle green glow radiating from it. Not that it did much, as the source of Percy’s pain wasn’t something life mana could help with. Still, he did appreciate the gesture. “Like I’ve torn out a part of my soul.” the young man grinned. “How long was I out this time?” “Just the night.” Percy exhaled in relief. . Not only had he recovered much sooner, but he’d done so before his clone returned – which was progress. Evidently, his efforts over the past few weeks hadn’t been for naught. But thinking of a possibility, he paled. Panicking, he tried pulling some mana to his eyes, to check his soul’s condition. He frowned. His core was surprisingly empty. It should have recovered on its own by now, since he’d slept for a long time… Over the next few minutes, he meditated to speed up his regeneration, managing to manually gather some mana, eventually. Turning Soul Vision on, he examined himself, his features soon twisting at the sight. His soul was in even worse shape than the first time he’d ever laid eyes on it. Technically, it wasn’t too surprising. Back then, it had already had weeks to heal on its own before he learned about his affinity. Still, the sight was unsettling to behold. The tears were too wide and too deep to be described as anymore. Some regions looked like they were held together by a few scant strands, about to break off any moment now. But the worst part was the hole in his chest. It was as if a giant had scooped out a huge chunk of his soul with an oversized spoon, as the edges in the crater squirmed, leaking mana. Apparently, his soul was frantically sucking the mana out of his sternum, trying to hold itself together. Yet, it wasn’t all bad news. Stretching out of the hole in his chest, Percy felt something extending into the distance. It was invisible even to Soul Vision, somehow even corporeal than soul mana. If he had to describe it, it was as if somebody had grabbed an and rolled it up into a rope. Like an umbilical cord, letting him sense that his soul clone was still out there, . Only then did he let out the turbid breath he’d been holding. He sure hoped his clone would survive longer than the other one. And if he was lucky, even bring back something useful when it was done. For now, he could find comfort in the fact he was awake and could do other things while waiting. It didn’t seem he could practice his soul magic, as his mana was still busy trying to keep his soul together, but perhaps he could feed his second core elixirs and get a bit more used to it over the next few days.

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(Book 3 Complete!) The Lone Wanderer: A World-hopping LitRPG Adventure
(Book 3 Complete!) The Lone Wanderer: A World-hopping LitRPG Adventure Author:PathOfPen
[START OF BOOK 1] Chapter 1 – A strange experience Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 2 – Alive Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 3 – A meeting with baldy Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 4 – Whistling Woods Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 5 – Affinities Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 6 – Pilgrimage Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 7 – The most ancient art Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 8 – Soul Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 9 – Family Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 10 – Archibald Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 11 – Cracks Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 12 – Clone Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 13 – Cousins Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 14 – Elaine Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 15 – Soul clone Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 16 – Second core Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 17 – A painful endeavour Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 18 – Wanderer Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 19 – Possessed Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 20 – Micky Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 21 – Dance Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 22 – Kik’lit Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 23 – Circulation Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 24 – Mixcoatl Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 25 – Spells Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 26 – Secret Arts Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 27 – Beast affinity Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 28 – A peculiar diet Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 29 – Mana channels Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 30 – One year Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 31 – Leaving the nest Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 32 – Two solutions Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 33 – Trouble Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 34 – Unexpected boon Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 35 – Scorpions Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 36 – Fungal Spire Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 37 – Registration Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 38 – Orientation Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 39 – Starry Drones Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 40 – Starry Workers Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 41 – A poor showing Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 42 – Adjusting tactics Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 43 – Aleyn Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 44 – Opportunity Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 45 – Introduction to alchemy Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 46 – An idea Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 47 – Healed Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 48 – Limit Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 49 – Frozen expanse Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 50 – The hunt resumes Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 51 – Potions Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 52 – Time management Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 53 – Three pillars Sep 10th, 2025
Chapter 54 – Orin Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 55 – A message from a god Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 56 – Calm before the storm Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 57 – Nesha Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 58 – Soul channels Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 59 – Floating Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 60 – Docile Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 61 – Holy ball of fur Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 62 – Crystal Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 63 – Emergency Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 64 – Maelstrom Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 65 – Aftermath Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 66 – Hemarakah Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 67 – Vent Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 68 – Alchemist Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 69 – Starry Soldiers Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 70 – Second year in the Guild Sep 12th, 2025
Announcements Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 71 – Crystallization Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 72 – Unexpected visitor Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 73 – House Tantalus Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 74 – Gabe Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 75 – Wings Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 76 – Complications Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 77 – Decree Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 78 – Blessing Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 79 – Natural selection Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 80 – Preparations Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 81 – Gabe’s second affinity Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 82 – Fifth wave Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 83 – Moment of truth Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 84 – Persistence Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 85 – Gabe’s gamble Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 86 – BUMP Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 87 – Advancement Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 88 – Synchronization Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 89 – Condensing crystals Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 90 – Compromise Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 91 – Deal Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 92 – Negotiations Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 93 – Aurora Dew Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 94 – Affinity fusion Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 95 – Teal fog Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 96 – Happy 20!!! Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 97 – Oblivious Agent Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 98 – Tests Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 99 – Buggy vessel Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 100 – Into the Spire Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 101 – Whirlpool of Four Streams Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 102 – Micky’s second core Sep 12th, 2025
Chapter 103 – House Talos Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 104 – Smooth sailing no more Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 105 – Escape Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 106 – Unsettling Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 107 – Hell Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 108 – Starry Knight Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 109 – Regal intent Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 110 – Devourer Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 111 – Slaughter Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 112 – Mutations Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 113 – Search Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 114 – Ripples Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 115 – Clothes Sep 17th, 2025
[END OF BOOK 1] Chapter 116 – Mantle Sep 17th, 2025
[START OF BOOK 2] Chapter 117 – Destination Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 118 – Takeo Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 119 – Infestation Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 120 – Sengo Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 121 – Concrete Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 122 – Steel Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 123 – Torui village Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 124 – Blighted bloodline Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 125 – Rare affinity Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 126 – Dessert Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 127 – Wild Art Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 128 – Grisly Bog Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 129 – Bogside Town Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 130 – Karma Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 131 – Settling in Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 132 – Monkey Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 133 – Reunion Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 134 – Runecrafting Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 135 – Metatron Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 136 – The Tale of Svarog Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 137 – A dangerous game Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 138 – Rodrick Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 139 – Quarterstaff Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 140 – Reinforcement Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 141 – Demi-humans Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 142 – War Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 143 – Waves Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 144 – Two things Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 145 – Caught Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 146 – Spectral fiend Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 147 – Beacon Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 148 – Good will Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 149 – Blockade Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 150 – Harvester Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 151 – Teal powder Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 152 – Who am I? Sep 17th, 2025
Chapter 153 – Housewife Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 154 – Mend Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 155 – Spirit Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 156 – Parrot Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 157 – Large animals Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 158 – Plan Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 159 – Magiscript challenge Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 160 – Shopping Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 161 – New runes Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 162 – Farming credits Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 163 – Mana conversion Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 164 – Self-bestowal Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 165 – Ambush Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 166 – Slugfest Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 167 – Operation Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 168 – Outcome Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 169 – Truth Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 170 – Snitches and stitches Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 171 – Disgust Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 172 – Hot or cold Sep 19th, 2025
Chapter 173 – Rune delivery service Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 174 – Gauntlet Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 175 – Just getting started Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 176 – Stitching Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 177 – Ea’s Gift Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 178 – Alchemic principles Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 179 – Marble Reef Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 180 – Extraction Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 181 – The alchemy test Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 182 – Alchemist’s Eye Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 183 – Tools for a better future Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 184 – Advancing in the Grisly Bog Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 185 – Ea’s Decree Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 186 – Sorcerer’s Eye Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 187 – Foresight Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 188 – Casters Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 189 – Trollsden Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 190 – Honourable Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 191 – Exchange Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 192 – Duel Sep 21st, 2025
Chapter 193 – Troll king Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 194 – Fury Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 195 – To the victor go the spoils Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 196 – Shadows and rainbows Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 197 – Truthseeker Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 198 – Three Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 199 – Eviction Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 200 – Chase Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 201 – Garden Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 202 – Grim Dance (1) Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 203 – Grim Dance (2) Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 204 – Grim Dance (3) Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 205 – Rending Tornado Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 206 – Food Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 207 – Homecoming (1) – Galahad Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 208 – Homecoming (2) – Percy Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 209 – Homecoming (3) – Archibald Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 210 – Homecoming (4) – Nesha Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 211 – Homecoming (5) – Elaine Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 212 – Homecoming (6) – Micky Sep 23rd, 2025
Chapter 213 – Homecoming (7) – Rambert Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 214 – Growing mushrooms Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 215 – Domain Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 216 – Crimson mushrooms Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 217 – New recipe Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 218 – A favourable deal Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 219 – Brown potion Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 220 – Regulation Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 221 – Jason Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 222 – Diplomacy (1) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 223 – Diplomacy (2) Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 224 – Trollsfury potion Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 225 – Shroud Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 226 – The prey and the predator Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 227 – Rambert Sep 25th, 2025
[END OF BOOK 2] Chapter 228 – Lotus of a Myriad Rivers Sep 25th, 2025
[START OF BOOK 3] Chapter 229 – Future Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 230 – Noland Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 231 – Ambitious projects Sep 25th, 2025
Chapter 232 – Self-repair Sep 25th, 2025
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